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This article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page as Today's featured article on April 28, 2004.

Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
March 18, 2004	Featured article candidate	Promoted
March 20, 2005	Featured article review	Demoted
December 12, 2005	Good article nominee	Listed
February 7, 2006	Peer review	Reviewed
June 27, 2006	Featured article candidate	Not promoted
October 17, 2006	Good article reassessment	Delisted
October 14, 2008	Good article nominee	Listed
November 26, 2024	Good article reassessment	Kept
Current status: Former featured article, current good article

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Semi-protected edit request on 8 September 2024

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Page link does not work. 64.189.18.28 (talk) 04:24, 8 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

What page link? Please be more specific. Bastun^{Ėġáḍβáś₮ŭŃ!} 10:53, 8 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. ⸺(Random)staplers 17:01, 8 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ancient anaesthesia

copy/paste (source Alcohols_(medicine)#Ancient_world):

Beer is one of the earliest known ingredients for wound healing. A medical prescription from Mesopotamia describes a method for healing wounds:^[1]^[2]

Pound together fur-turpentine, pine-turpentine, tamarisk, daisy, flour of inninnu strain; mix in milk and beer in a small copper pan; spread on skin; bind on him, and he shall recover.

Add Template:Ancient anaesthesia

--94.255.152.53 (talk) 04:07, 8 October 2024 (UTC) 94.255.152.53 (talk) 04:07, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wound healing is not anaesthesia? Would we expect to add any template to the articles for each of those ingredients? Thanks. Martinevans123 (talk) 08:56, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

^ Shah, JB (September 2011). "The history of wound care". The Journal of the American College of Certified Wound Specialists. 3 (3): 65–6. doi:10.1016/j.jcws.2012.04.002. PMC 3601883. PMID 24525756.
^ Broughton G, Janis JE, Attinger CE (2006). "A Brief History of Wound Care". Plastic and Reconstructive Surgery. 117 (7 Suppl): 6S – 11S. doi:10.1097/01.prs.0000225429.76355.dd. PMID 16799371.

Semi-protected edit request on 31 October 2024

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change "numerous types of plants, spices, and other substances such as narcotic herbs, to numerous types of plants, spices, and other substances such as narcotic herbs, also known as gruit, that when heated incorrectly could cause hallucinations, and the specific mixtures were varied from brewer to brewer." Anthropol0gyinterest (talk) 00:49, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. Encoded Talk 💬 20:25, 2 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA concerns

I am concerned that this article no longer meets the good article criteria. Some of my concerns are outlined below:

The article has several uncited statements, including entire paragraphs.
I don't think the lead summarises all major aspects of the article.
The formatting could be improved. Some sections are quite long and could be broken up with additional headings (my recommendations is four paragraphs maximum before a new heading) while the "Top-fermented beers" section has short one-or-two line paragraphs that should be merged together.

Is anyone willing to address these concerns, or should this go to WP:GAR? Z1720 (talk) 03:55, 12 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA Reassessment

Beer

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Result: Kept. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:32, 26 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The article has several uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. I don't think the lead summarises all major aspects of the article. The formatting could also be improved. Some sections are quite long and could be broken up with additional headings (my recommendation is four paragraphs maximum under each heading) while the "Top-fermented beers" section has short one-or-two line paragraphs that should be merged together. Z1720 (talk) 14:55, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Well this was quite the mess. I've done a fair bit of tidying-up, reduced overlap with Brewing, added refs, edited, closed up, and extended the lead. I think it's serviceable now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:55, 22 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Keep, now with Chiswick's improvements. 750 h+ 13:43, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I added some cn tags, and removed an Amazon reference that was not needed. Should be very close to a keep now. Z1720 (talk) 16:25, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ah yes, fixed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:28, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

[1] Shah, JB (September 2011). "The history of wound care". The Journal of the American College of Certified Wound Specialists. 3 (3): 65–6. doi:10.1016/j.jcws.2012.04.002. PMC 3601883. PMID 24525756.

[2] Broughton G, Janis JE, Attinger CE (2006). "A Brief History of Wound Care". Plastic and Reconstructive Surgery. 117 (7 Suppl): 6S – 11S. doi:10.1097/01.prs.0000225429.76355.dd. PMID 16799371.

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